lostthought

Have you written this before?

Scared yet?

O.O I'm trying to make you American? *Wait, I'm guessing you guys don't have 911*

Still, Rose Red is a girl.

I thought Rose Red was a girl. :o

It's either the Wolf or the Woodcutter.

I'm with Willow. This really should be posted elsewhere. I'm guessing Hailey is a high school student that likes to 'shag' guys. she have more siblings has more What's the ...

I have a feeling this is a draft

Thanks. The first one I was unsure of the wording and the third one just seemed like it would be an independent clause.

Then can I ask what I got wrong so I can apply it to future knowledge when reviewing?

I'm more into grammar and capitalization, and I know other people are more into knowing what their story is like. I'm not very good at reviewing the plot and character ...

Hmm, I suppose we aren't counting by title names then.

Lu, I'm guessing the girl turns into a vampire as well and later on fights the vampires? Because of the present and the past being so far apart, there is ...

I'm reminded of the book Secret Garden. It's a very good book.

Yes, I have the mind of a kindergarten and an adult, so my thoughts tend to blend sometimes (hence childhood setting and adult main characters)