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Yes! I got this! Ok, since I claimed this piece, let's review it, shall we? Nitpicks- 1) ok, this may seem weird, but it's and its are pretty different. I ...

*sobs sobs* This is sad. I have no idea for a title however. All I know is that this is historical fiction. Onwards to the review! Ok, we have the ...

It's done! Another achievement by knight! Let's review this. I'll be busy review day and I might not have a review on this. Nitpicks! “Ouuuuuch.” I moaned "Ouuuuuch," I moaned ...

Bullying, number one problem in our society today (at least in America). Well, let's review. The only nitpick that I have is that the entire thing is a big clunky ...

I'm requested as well (I was procrastinating on the subject for I was at school). Technically, you never see her die. It just says theoretically what is going to happen. ...

I'm here to review as requested (please read the revised rules though. I'm pretty sure you haven't seen them yet) I remember reading this when it first came out. I ...

This princess sounds a lot like snow white (I haven't read your other chapters so I wouldn't know) and she is a vampire/fairy/nymph thing. This has some potential. I'm curious ...

Ok, I'm super late so give me a break here. The only nitpick that hasn't been stolen yet it's how the entire time the dad was talking, there is nothing ...

I'm a bit sick of Sirena. But hey, once you get past the fact that she kissed her brother to death and set birds on someone she hated, she isn't ...

If you kill Vivianne, I shall never kill you! Joking, joking. But still. Do not kill her off. She isn't evil. The only nitpick I noted was this It was ...

Wee, a fan fiction! Let's review this before someone takes the glory of first review. Nitpicks, But I knew that we weren't in a normal hospital since the doctors their ...

Hi word, here to review. Too bad that you said that the lowercase was intentional. I would have pointed you to the lowercase July. To be straight forward, who is ...

Here to review! Mirrors I saw so nitpicks in this small poem. It is really sad and that is how most see themselves, not as a average living person, but ...

Ok, I'm here to review, clearly this piece needs TLC- Tender, loving, criticism. Nitpicks Ok, so I mainly saw a lot of semicolons. Ever heard of comma overuse? I think ...

Wasn't I following this story before you disappeared? Took long enough for you to write this anyhow. :) Well, let's review, shall we? Nitpicks Ok, so the nitpicks I have ...