lordgluzman

If this is a true thing about you show this poem to the people that piss you off! They will maybe listen to you because this poem is so good. ...

This was super interesting! But I don't remember the city name in Warhammer and Dwarfs do tie up their hair with rings. But I was hoping that the dwarfs would ...

It was not bad but I thought it was too short! But you have punctuation which is good. I gut confused on the very last part: So why do I ...

That is one of the best stories you ever did. But I am having a feeling that you put in extra adjectives this time for example: the crystal clear rain ...

UM UM UM...UM You know October girl you got talent. I can really see it, you use good words you have powerfull sentences and I can see that, but you ...

Dang girl! I am not an emo but I sure do like goth style. In fact I wish I would be a goth in some ways. I think lyrics are ...

That is a sweet poem. It is a about winter rite? I thought it was good but I think it would be better if you would add some more color, ...

WOW, really good. I have to say you have a great imagination. Every single poem of yours is great! but You have two wrong spelled words and I got a ...

AWSOME!!!! This is much better then the WEED song you wrote. I am now happy again. The stroy was coolio and interesting. Except the problem is I think you should ...

Fantastic, great, superb and great again. This poem is really powerful It is like you telling a story of a criminal. It brings in moral as well + your poem ...

I am sorry Vlad this time I will have to put you down... What you are doing is wrong!!! For example I try to tell people that drugs are bad ...

Dang Girl!!! :) I guess all the boyfriends gotta be ready for you. JOKEING!!!. The poem was really good. I think if you will turn it more into a lyric ...

Hey! It's me. I am glad that you are back and you wrote another good poem. I really like it. The poem is peacfull and pretty but can you please ...

LOL, That was good. It was funny, good words were used, and it had a great idea. This poem is really unique which is really good. But it was confuseing ...

It was good because I could see your effort in this poem but It was confuseing for me. Because in the poem you are saying that the love you have ...