looseleaf

Thank you for the review! I appreciate it!

Thank you so much for the review! I really appreciate it!

Thank you so much for the review!

Thank you so much for the review! I really appreciate it!

Thank you so much! I will definitely work on the part where Ruby takes Abby home. I also need to work on making sure Ruby comes across as a jerk, ...

Thank you so much for the review! I didn't do the spacing on purpose - YWS screwed it up.

Thank you so much Rain! I think I will add a bit inbetween Ruby spotting Abby and deciding to take her in. Maybe watching her for a bit or something. ...

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Thanks for the review! Ruby didn't recognize the number that was calling her, so after she found out it was Dennis, she assumed he got a new phone.

Thanks for the review! I really appreicate it!

Thank you so much! If I ever do edit it, I will definitely make sure to slow it down!

Thanks for the review, Momo! She has a brother, but because of the stress of being so wealthy and having such a high status (they're very high up there), he ...

Thanks for the review, Rain! I appreciate it. I totally understand how I need more detail.

Thanks for the review! I will definitely fix up the next draft. I was a bit confused.. what was your favorite line? xD Sorry! Also, the people and the conductor ...

Thank you so much! I appreciate the review. I think in the next draft I will add a bit more detail, because now that I reread it, you can't really ...