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Re: Prologue - Unnamed LMS VII Novel
Hey Lipton! Thanks so much for the review! I definitely need to work on the narration. It would make way more sense for the language and perspective to be from ...
Jul 19 -
Re: Prologue - Unnamed LMS VII Novel
Hey Tikaya! Thanks for the review! Thanks for catching my mistake with the Sorenson surname! I meant to change it and I guess I just didn't. I originally meant for ...
Jul 19 -
Re: Under the Sycamore
thanks so much for the review! that's so nice of you!
Oct 2, 2023 -
Re: Draft that I deleted
Hey Gengar! Just leaving a quick comment~ I thought this was super interesting! My school doesn't have JROTC, since we're an all-girls school, so it was neat to read about ...
Mar 29, 2023 -
Re: a 2000's fad
Seirre!! I absolutely loved this!! I love sad poems and stories that reminisce on the past, so this was perfect for me. Your metaphor of the tricycle is *chefs kiss*--how ...
Feb 28, 2023 -
Re: Movie Review Essay on "October Sky" (w/ bibliography)
yes
Dec 7, 2022 -
Re: The Halls of St. Julian's - Eduard 1.1
Thanks for the review, Random! I really appreciate it. You were dead on the car being swept away and Eduard being concerned over their financial issues. Have a good day!
Sep 9, 2022 -
Re: The Halls of St. Julian's - Eduard 1.1
Thanks so much Andrew! I'm glad you liked it. I'll definitely change Mrs. to Ms., that was a mistake, and reword the past tense in that one sentence! As for ...
Sep 9, 2022 -
Re: 4:08 am (and all the texts I don't remember sending)
just letting you know that the image also doesn't work on my device --> it only says "Image Preview" as lliyah said, though, it's a great title and i bet ...
Aug 30, 2022 -
Re: Eraser Shavings - Chapter One
Thanks for the review! Yes, the dialogue between the officers was intentional, but I definitely could have written it better lol. Q is 15, going on 16, so good job ...
Apr 19, 2022 -
Re: Eraser Shavings - Prologue
Hey Andrew! Thanks so much for the review. I'll definitely slow down the pace in the next chapters/when I revise this one and add more detail. And I meant to ...
Feb 22, 2022 -
Re: Under the Sycamore
Thank you so much!
Jan 12, 2022 -
Re: Under the Sycamore
Thank you so much for the nice review, Harry! I really appreciate it.
Jan 11, 2022 -
Re: I'm Just A Pet Rock
Thanks for the review! I appreciate the advice!
Sep 16, 2021 -
Re: Chapter Three - Dad Hacked Death (OLD)
Oh my God, my coding. >.> I'm so sorry.
Sep 10, 2021
