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  • Other » Narrative, General Re: The Wolf Creek Babies!

    Aww, so cute :). This was a very good description of your visit. I really want to go now after you wrote this. One little suggestion: I began feeling his ...

    Oct 16, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Sunflakes

    Wow! I really enjoyed this poem. :) I liked the words such as sunman or sunball. Those were very amusing. My imagination went wild as I thought of how fun ...

    Oct 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Grim Limericks

    Wow! Nice job. This are very grim limericks so the title fits. Most limericks are funny and some are even unrealistic, but these ones are different. These are very realistic ...

    Oct 16, 2014
  • Script » General, General Re: Kissing lesson with a sandwhich

    Wow! Nice job! When I first read this, I didn't understand, but after I reread, it was pretty humorous. Two items you might want to edit: Sister: What the hell ...

    Sep 11, 2014
  • Script » Humor, General Re: Talk Show With a Cat

    This is a funny work! I like how you had Key's thought because it shows that the show business isn't always fun and games. Yes, this may be about cats, ...

    Sep 11, 2014


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