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Re: The Wolf Creek Babies!
Aww, so cute :). This was a very good description of your visit. I really want to go now after you wrote this. One little suggestion: I began feeling his ...
Oct 16, 2014 -
Re: Sunflakes
Wow! I really enjoyed this poem. :) I liked the words such as sunman or sunball. Those were very amusing. My imagination went wild as I thought of how fun ...
Oct 16, 2014 -
Re: Grim Limericks
Wow! Nice job. This are very grim limericks so the title fits. Most limericks are funny and some are even unrealistic, but these ones are different. These are very realistic ...
Oct 16, 2014 -
Re: Kissing lesson with a sandwhich
Wow! Nice job! When I first read this, I didn't understand, but after I reread, it was pretty humorous. Two items you might want to edit: Sister: What the hell ...
Sep 11, 2014 -
Re: Talk Show With a Cat
This is a funny work! I like how you had Key's thought because it shows that the show business isn't always fun and games. Yes, this may be about cats, ...
Sep 11, 2014
