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Re: Five Hundred Pound Catastrophe
I nearly cried laughing in some parts, and in others I was thoroughly disgusted. But I liked your story very much and I thought it was inventive and different. As ...
Jun 16, 2014 -
Re: Of Fights and Letters: Chapter 5: Carter
I am sorry for being MIA... but thanks for your wonderful review :) and I'm glad you think that I gave good insight into teenage boys, because (I am a ...
Jun 11, 2014 -
Re: The Corridors of Life
Oh but I just wanted to say that you might want to watch out for the run-on sentences.
May 22, 2014 -
Re: Nowhere
You are welcome! And I'm not someone to tell someone they have a talent when they don't--you are a great writer! Keep at it!
Apr 19, 2014 -
Re: Of Fights and Letters: Chapter 4: Nico
Thank you for reviewing and I will definitely fix those problems
Mar 20, 2014 -
Re: Of Fights and Letters: Chapter 2: Fighting and Forensics
Thank you very much! I really wasn't sure if I should continue because nobody has been reading it, but I will try to post more chapters at more regular intervals.
Mar 17, 2014 -
Re: Galaxy Boy
I loved this story. It was so beautiful! I think, though, that some of your sentences may be a little long, which can cause some confusion as to what is ...
Mar 13, 2014 -
Re: The O'Connor File
Happy to help!
Mar 8, 2014 -
Re: Of Fights and Letters: Chapter 3: Flirting and Infirmaries
Thank you very much! That means a lot. And do you have any suggestions for me on how I can slow it down? That always seems to be a problem ...
Mar 8, 2014 -
Re: Coffee, Grit, and my Dad's Best Shoes 1.1
Good to know.
Mar 7, 2014 -
Re: Monsters under my bed (reviewed)
Wow this is very well written... you did a nice job with it.
Feb 26, 2014 -
Re: Of Fights and Letters: Chapter 1: New Faces
Thank you so much for not only reviewing but giving me tips... I was really struggling with the balance of giving and withholding background information... you helped so much.
Feb 26, 2014