liveandbreathewords

I nearly cried laughing in some parts, and in others I was thoroughly disgusted. But I liked your story very much and I thought it was inventive and different. As ...

I am sorry for being MIA... but thanks for your wonderful review :) and I'm glad you think that I gave good insight into teenage boys, because (I am a ...

Oh but I just wanted to say that you might want to watch out for the run-on sentences.

You are welcome! And I'm not someone to tell someone they have a talent when they don't--you are a great writer! Keep at it!

Thank you for reviewing and I will definitely fix those problems

Thank you very much! I really wasn't sure if I should continue because nobody has been reading it, but I will try to post more chapters at more regular intervals.

I loved this story. It was so beautiful! I think, though, that some of your sentences may be a little long, which can cause some confusion as to what is ...

Happy to help!

Thank you very much! That means a lot. And do you have any suggestions for me on how I can slow it down? That always seems to be a problem ...

Good to know.

I agree with you... I really liked this chapter as well!!!

Wow this is very well written... you did a nice job with it.

Thank you so much for not only reviewing but giving me tips... I was really struggling with the balance of giving and withholding background information... you helped so much.