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Re: That's So Gay!
I thought you did a great job and this poem talks nicely about some very tough topics. The only thing that I can suggest is perhaps adding a little bit ...
Dec 4, 2011 -
Re: Forgotten
I think that the idea is great, but it could have been written a little better. It seems like you tried to rhyme it in some places and then not ...
Dec 4, 2011 -
Re: Don't You Let It Die, Jane
This is so amazing! you an an awesome song writer. I would definitely get this on my ipod if it was actually recorded. I can picture Avril Lavigne or some ...
Nov 13, 2011 -
Re: letting go
When I started out reading this, I have to admit, I didn't really like it, but it was truly amazing. I don't have any negative comments for it! I love ...
Nov 8, 2011 -
Re: My Dreams
I really like it! At some points it is not completely clear about what you are talking about and it seems like you change subject matter a few times through ...
Nov 8, 2011 -
Re: Kill Me
I love the poem. It is really intense and pulls you in. One thing that I didn't like was how you picked up a rhyme in the middle of it. ...
Nov 8, 2011