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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: The sun Will Rise Again: chapter one

    Hey there, cool piece :) I love the cultural aspect of it. One thing, though is that you may want to give it a quick once over, there are a ...

    Sep 15, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Flashbacks: prologue

    Hey, Cass! Neat story :) Let's get right to it, eh? I have read the other comments and I know somebody mentioned that the flashback might not be needed. I ...

    Sep 15, 2014
  • Other » General, General Re: Claret

    Hi there! Very interesting piece, the description fits it nicely ;D Anyway, my humble ponderings... "Fuck." -Fantastic opener. "I hate it when it goes over the good ones - my ...

    Sep 9, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Girl in the Painting

    Not sure why I'm reviewing poetry, but you mentioned it in chat so here I am. My thoughts as a non-poet :P "Pudgy are her hands that hold a basket ...

    Sep 9, 2014


You own everything that happened to you. Tell your stories. If people wanted you to write warmly about them, they should have behaved better.
— Anne Lamott