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Re: The sun Will Rise Again: chapter one
Hey there, cool piece :) I love the cultural aspect of it. One thing, though is that you may want to give it a quick once over, there are a ...
Sep 15, 2014 -
Re: Flashbacks: prologue
Hey, Cass! Neat story :) Let's get right to it, eh? I have read the other comments and I know somebody mentioned that the flashback might not be needed. I ...
Sep 15, 2014 -
Re: Claret
Hi there! Very interesting piece, the description fits it nicely ;D Anyway, my humble ponderings... "Fuck." -Fantastic opener. "I hate it when it goes over the good ones - my ...
Sep 9, 2014 -
Re: The Girl in the Painting
Not sure why I'm reviewing poetry, but you mentioned it in chat so here I am. My thoughts as a non-poet :P "Pudgy are her hands that hold a basket ...
Sep 9, 2014
