little.angelfire

Oh my god, Lucy XD I love this poem, maybe because I'm the REAL platypus (people that were in the chatroom with Aet and I would get it ^.~) Did ...

Everyone's pretty much got everything but I just wanted to say that I love how you're taking the approve of mythology and not skimping out on the facts of who ...

I think the beginning and end of the story is the hardest part. I like the beginning, but not the way you had done it. It seems a little awkwardly ...

I love Monty Python. I thought this piece of work would never come from them if they were all still alive. If you were trying to make fun of them, ...

Well, actually,I like it. For some reason, I don't even have anything to tell you on how to better it. I didn't really see any grammatical errors, not that I ...

well, i like this peice particularly because it's original and i just lurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrv cats. ^.^ lets see here, i see this is quite imaginitive for, sadly, cats are incapable of ...

i kinda of had the same problem as Sam, but i soon got it. i had also gotten confused if the second section was still past tense or not, but ...

Hey there. i really loved your story. your prologue is what drew me in. i loved the way you had described that old house. it made the story sound really ...