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Re: Dear younger brother
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Sep 28
This is a really touching piece. The repeated “I’m sorry” makes the poem feel very personal and shows how much regret and care the speaker still carries. I also like ... -
Re: Chapter 3: Odehi and The Conspiracy (final part) - The Lady of Light (completed novel, draft 3)
I really enjoyed reading this chapter. The story has an interesting sense of mystery, and the developing conspiracy keeps the reader curious about what will happen next. The characters and ...
Sep 28
