limaswork22

The grammar wasnt fully correct but the way you detailed the story was precise. It was amazing how Draco had contemplated a big, bad decision by remembering a time when ...

A great story. Your character had displayed a brave and kind act. I loved how he saved his enemies life and gained respect in the end. The only problem with ...

Your story had kept me reading and not alot of stories have that affect. However, You didnt go in much details on why that man wanted to commit suicide. It ...