lilytig50

I needed it to be short as this is a story I am writing on another app and just wanted to see how the introduction was to the story. However ...

As this is the first part you could make it shorter next time to build up expense and to make readers want to read on more. Some people may be ...

Wow this is brilliant! I love the action and drama. The tension is also great! I needed something to cheer me up but even though this is rather disturbing I ...

Thank you so much! When I started on this grou I didn't know I would have so much help! This is the introduction of a story I have been writing ...