lilymoore

Hey Silver. Because this is your baby, I promise to do my best not to throw it through a stained glass window. Opening Line My birth, according to all records, ...

Hey, Onxy, it’s Santa. Okay, first off, you’re not the only one who has ever felt like a poetry virgin. I’ve maybe only ever written two poems and in my ...

Hey there YG, how’s it hanging. Sorry if it took me so long to get here. I sorta forgot about my WRFF thread. Okay, poetry isn’t my specialty but I’ll ...

Hello anima9. Sorry it took me so long to get here. I got distracted with some stuff about finals and then forgot to check on my WRFF thread. Okay, the ...

Hey there Era! Lily is here so do not fear. So, let’s start off with the first line. A century come and gone and I am but a witness. Okay, ...

First of all Jiggs, thank you a billion times over for reminding me of my WRFF thread. I ish here…ten days later than my normal. *eek* Darn Birds Okay, the ...

Hey there smorgs! I didn’t have a lot of time to really seriously nitpick at this today because I was in Spanish class but I did want to commend you ...

Hey there Surreal. Okay, so I read through part one very quickly today (I didn’t have much time to go over it in a lot of detail because class was ...

Hey there Kylan. Seeing as how I’m in history with nothing to do, I figured I should spit out a review. And might I just add that I’m very glad ...

Hey there AunnaLea, it’s Lily here at your service. *bows* First of all, might I just say welcome to YWS and make another quick note to stop by the Welcome ...

Hey there Barrett, you talked this up so much in chat yesterday, I figured I should really take the time to read it. And I won’t lie, I’m really glad ...

Jigs, this is splendiferliquorishable. From beginning to end I was hooked and I loved the way you gave Ronny and Jim such distinct dialogue. And as far as the second ...

Wow, I’m really glad that Jabber mentioned this piece to me. Oh hello there, it is I, lily of the moore. :D *terrible pun* I didn’t find any errors with ...

Hey there EB, it’s lily here as asked. Shall we get started? We shall. Nitpicks It’s almost Christmas, and I believe that the children of town could use some gifts. ...

Hi peanut. I totally got distracted mid review and started chilling in chat. *bad lily* But anyways, let’s start with the little stuff! Nipicks It was supposed to be my ...