lilymoore

Hey there, I reviewed Scene One, I figured I would come back for a second taste! We've been gone for for hours, Um...yeah, I think you mean the number four, ...

This poem, it rings a lot of truth, StreetRat. The structure is lovely and the word choice is simple which makes the whole poem really accessible. We all hate the ...

Hi there, Hiadel. The names Lily and it’s nice to make your acquaintance. *shakes hands* So, I have some nitpicks! Not get some rest before the sun comes up. I ...

Ooh, Kylan is here! *waves to Kylan* CARNIVAL I really only had one little thing that I pondered over on this and it was with the phrase “depression glass.” What ...

Hey there magic! Right now, I think you have the very barest bones of a poem set up here. You can really get in here and make this a wonderful ...

Hi there Abstract and welcome to YWS! Okay, so as far as the poem goes, I like it quite a bit, mostly because it’s kind of dark. But I do ...

Hey there kingo, it’s Lily again! You know what’s really great. I don’t have anything negative to a say about this poem. Heck, I couldn’t even find anything to say ...

Oh My Golgi Bodies, I love this way more than the first version that I read (not that that version was bad, but yeah). :D Mostly though, this improvement comes ...

I watched horrified as Logan, my sweet Logan, my best friend, held a shot gun level with his father’s face. Okay, opening lines are something I always seem to find ...

Aww! *hugs!* Why does it seem like everything I’ve read today on YWS been kind of sad as of late. However, this is a really unique story line but the ...

Hey there lakegirl! Lily here and I’m going to totally attempt to review this. Okay? Okay! :D So, right off the bat, I’m looking at the layout of this and ...

*grabs newbie and huggles obnoxiously* Aww, it sounds like you’ve obviously had it rough but I think that anyone who is able to write about their own life is stronger ...

Hello you...again! And I finally found two things I could at least sort of nitpick. The wind bites. The wind screams. The wind tantalizes. The wind’s alive. The repetitive feel ...

I’m...absolutely...flabbergasted. This is amazing. I mean, I didn’t even read this because it looked really long but I’m so totally glad that I did read it. That also brings me ...

Hey, you there, remember me! I hope you do but if you don’t, well, that’s okay. But I would be really sad. :( Once I finished this, I did find ...