lilymoore

Well, I’ve learned something today if nothing else because of you, but only because I had no idea what a Rondel was. Not only that, but started this review about ...

Hey there Frosty! *bows* I’m Lily! Oh, and welcome welcome welcome to YWS! Home of the best and brightest of the WoW world. Only kidding of course, but really, welcome. ...

Hey there ATF!!! I’m Lily! I know we haven’t met but I’m your new best friend! Hehe “What’s it gonna be?” demanded Shane. I love this opening line. Some people ...

Hey there abba! I see we haven’t met. I’m Lily! *bows* So, I think you’ve set this poem up with some great imagery. That is probably the most impressive part ...

Wowsers, I was about to say “Welcome” but you have been a member since, like, forever. I counted. You were the 25th member to join the site. Yowsers! Anyways, reviewing. ...

Aqua!! Wowsers! I’ll just start that right there! You made me finish reading something that was written in second person. That doesn’t happen often. However I did find two little ...

Hiya Skutter. So I've got one little nitpick. All drunk on thee beer, Okay, 'thee' is my problem with this line. It sounds very over exagerated. In fact, thee seems ...

Hi Kyllorac! Reviewing time! DuhnDuhnDuuuun! So, right off the bat, I want to say that 9 times out of 10, I get super excited to see when you’ve written something, ...

Oh Dear! FireNoPants!!! I get to review you! waving for someone's attention Adding the preposition ‘for’ makes this sound a bit cleaner. One of the doctors, a suggested. As the ...

Heya Ross! Long time since I reviewed anything of yours. What happened to “Changing Seasons” anyways? I won’t try to be too obsessive, but there are a few nitpicks that ...

Hola , OneSun, me llama lily! I’m definitely not in Spanish class or anything. :D Anyways, I was going to review this. So right off the bat, I wanted to ...

Hi there, Era. I figured since you mentioned in chat last night that you posted something, I might just give it a look. :D I can taste the lust; Falling ...

Hello E.B. White! *snugs* I have just a few comments right off the bat. thus far in the summer. You’re making summer sound so general right here. It feels wrong ...

Hey there Hibiscus. So first off, it's a good idea to make any introduction into a story stand apart from the rest of the story. I recommend boldsora different color. ...

SCREAM! and SHOUT! Hello. Ask him, does he see? I’m not sure what it is about this line, but for some reason, I keep thinking that ‘if’ would sound better ...