lilldeh

Hello timmy! Im lilldeh =) I liked the poems and how they contradicted each other. The first poem seems to flow better in my opinion, but i don't care for ...

It was a cute little poem but thats really all i saw it as. I really have no nitpicks, the grammar was good along with the flow. I just felt ...

I like this a lot, but you need to proof read and put some commas and periods into it. This poem seems very good natured and sweet to me, it ...

This short story was very confusing to read. I felt like it was a very good attempted at a short story but you made some fatal errors that just completely ...

Iv never really read a lyrical poem and i honestly don't know how to determine what is good and what is not. I will say i do like the beginning ...