lilbean

I really liked your story. You have a few grammar errors in the third paragraph, in that paragraph you said got two times right next to each other. Also some ...

I really liked the story and the story twist was not as I expected it to be. The historical content was good. You should add more dialogue next time. I ...

I really liked the lot of the story and it's always good to make new friends. I wonder if you could add a little more detail in what is not ...