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Re: This is a Love Story - Part 3
This is a very good story! i loved that you started off with a question that everyone can answer. Overall the story was wonderful and I enjoyed it very much. ...
Sep 14, 2015 -
Re: The Suicidal Encounter That Saved Chapter 1
This is very sad but also very good! It's a very good topic, well not good in a good way but very relatable. you give a lot of nice details ...
Sep 14, 2015 -
Re: It’s not where you come from; it’s where you’re going.
I like this story, it made me laugh when he said " So I'm here cause I had a better shot than Billy?" It did make me laugh! I like ...
Sep 14, 2015 -
Re: Ella
This is a very nice start! My opinion would be when you're doing dialogue to put what the characters are saying in another paragraph! " Yeah when Pigs fly moron" ...
Sep 14, 2015