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Re: How Good, How Could?
I have a feeling you're reading some of this wrong. Try and read the line breaks with less of a pause. They are there to create a sense of urgency ...
May 31, 2008 -
Re: Sour
It makes up for the rhyming that wasn't there. It actually started out as a non-rhyming poem, but I didn't like it that way. Oh well :)
May 8, 2008
