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Exciting! I really can find few flaws. One thing is that there's not enough drama when Whoever incinerates the bush. I like the part where you say that Nara has ...

Interesting and exciting. It takes your attention and makes you want it to be longer. There are a few spelling errors, but they pale in comparison to the story's excitement. ...

Very sweet. I'm not sure how to make this review of such a short thing last for 250 characters, but here goes. I liked the simplicity and the poignancy, and ...

New member trying to rack up points! Your story was brilliant. I liked the names, and also the fact that she is Egyptian. The android was interesting. Your story used ...

Hello! I am a new member just entering the site. I uploaded a new work of mine minutes ago and now am trying to get enough points to upload more. ...

Good points: exciting, interesting, Connor doesn't like parties which I like. Also the names are cool. And you start to wonder what's on the mainland. Bad points: a few spelling ...