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Hey, Lee-Anna here! Great job! I like that you're using present tense. I haven't seen a lot of stories using present tense. I don't really see any nitpicks that no ...

Heyy, Lee-Anna here! First, I'd like to say you've got an okay idea going here. I'm just going to help with the grammatical errors. I sing to the lord of ...

This is so short, but it almost made me cry!! I love it! Might I add, I'm not that great at writing poems, so I'm not actually reviewing this...I just ...