lakegirls

Hi, The reason this site was made was for people to critic your work. If you can't take criticism then you can't be a writer. If you go to publisher ...

Hi, Please space before you post. It makes it hard for th other readers to read. Please space then I will crit and read :) -lg* pm me if you ...

Hi, Your story looks really good. I can't read it though, I can't read that font. I don't mean to be rude, but please change the font, i promise i ...

Hi T, A lot of people have said that you only get your permit when your 16 but in some places you can actually drive when your 16. I don't ...

Hi, I don't think so, I like it the way it is and I wouldn't know what to edit about it. I know it could be ten times better, I ...

Hi, I honestly don't know waht it is, so could one of you please tell me how to move? Or if you want you can move it for me. -lg*

Hi, If you want to put it into paragraphs, when you go to post it, just seperatre them, it usually works. -lg*

Thanks, it is probably one of my worst stories :P It is not one bit like any of the characters, but it was fun to write! -lg*

Kelsi...

There is going to be a story line in her next entry, but it was her first entry and she was upset that her Grandmother gave her a diary instead ...

Actually, that is what I was going for.

Hey Kelsi, it's me, send this to me so I can run through spell check, also, i'm going to tell you this tomorrow, oh well, i only got a page ...

I did think about this, but it's not a true story, also, i already moved it twice i don't want to annoy people, lol

I agree that it is not poetry, early on i did have it in short story and it was only my first time on this site. I do think it ...

Honestly, I have no clue :lol: It just kind of came to me, i think about these characters a lot, so it was easy.