ladymask

Thanks, both of you! :D NixonBlitzen: the dangling 's' was meant to convey a sort of break in thought, like "you cut open a rabbit..." was the main point, and ...

Thank you so very much for the comment! :D Just to clarify, Tyler didn't have much motivation for the road trip, aside from that Rick is his best friend, and ...

Thank you everyone :) It's condensed because it was for a personal flash fiction challenge, which is probably why it has the tone it has. But I'd very much like ...

Thanks very much, both of you!

Thanks very much! Essentially what has happened is this man, the main character, is a criminal who the government is analyzing through new induced-amnesia techniques. They're setting him up with ...

Thank you ma'am! The un-capitalization is intentional, actually :) I know it bothers some people, but for me, certain pieces just don't work without it. I'm strange like that ;)

Thanks so much for your feedback! I really appreciate it. This piece is very personal to me, so thank you for taking the time to read and review it! :D