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Re: The Planets are Dancing, The People are Dying- Prologue
Ok. I'm writing my first novel, so I'm interested in writing perspectives because I'm not sure if I should change mine to a different form. Message me when chapter 1 ...
Jan 17, 2015 -
Re: Katie's Poem
I wrote poetry a lot when I was little, but now I'm working on my first novel. :) This is really good if it's one of the first poems you've ...
Jan 16, 2015 -
Re: Katie's Poem
So... do you write poetry usually or do you write other things?
Jan 16, 2015 -
Re: Katie's Poem
God-sent Friend would be a good title. It's not great, but it's what came to mind.
Jan 16, 2015 -
Re: And then the dream comes true.........not
Ok. That makes sense! :) Excited to read more.
Jan 15, 2015 -
Re: Lady Liberty's Legacy Burnt Into Us All
I love poems that tell stories with creativity and a background woven into it discreetly. This was one of those poems. I found no grammatical errors at all and by ...
May 20, 2014 -
Re: Coin
This speaks a lot about how people treat academic talent. If you work hard for something, you appreciate it so much more than if you just have natural ability. It ...
May 12, 2014 -
Re: Rememberance Prologue
Some of my best story ideas come from dreams too. Excited to read more!
May 9, 2014 -
Re: Rememberance Prologue
Wow. I am terrible at prologues usually, but this one...Wow! It left out just enough to having me wondering what more there could be. This is the beginning of an ...
May 8, 2014
