-
Re: The 2020 War Chapter 1: The Letter
That was very good. It was very exciting to read. However, it needs more of a introduction. Like, where are we? When are we? Who is this character? It moves ...
May 7, 2014 -
Re: Distopia
Lots of descriptive words that made me feel like I was experiencing the character first hand. I couldn't stop reading it. When it was over, I was hoping to find ...
May 6, 2014 -
Re: What would we truly be?
I really enjoyed that. It is true that experiences, both good and bad, make a person stronger. If only more people could realize that as well as you put it. ...
May 5, 2014