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Re: "Our Jon"
I had no problem understanding it (I live in the US) so no worries about it not being clear. I like it, actually. I got chills at one part.
Oct 8, 2005 -
Re: No titile -story based on my mother's very chaotic childhood
Thanks :) I actually redid it this afternoon, so I am editing and putting the new version in now :D Thank you for replying! ETA: haha you might want to ...
Oct 6, 2005 -
Re: No titile -story based on my mother's very chaotic childhood
Aww, thank you! haha, the font has to be size twelve I believe. I actually spent fourty five minutes debating with myself on whether or not I could get away ...
Oct 5, 2005 -
Re: No titile -story based on my mother's very chaotic childhood
Thank you Qiguaigongfu! I really appreciate your reply. I am definetly going to take your suggestions! The problem is that I am sending this in to a school that has ...
Oct 5, 2005 -
Re: Bluebird
The first stanza was just amazing - afterwards though, it seemed like the rhymes became forced.
Oct 4, 2005 -
Re: Gone
I liked the idea you were trying to get across, but it sounded a little bit cliche. I think that you have a good idea in your mind though, and ...
Oct 4, 2005