kurocyn1

Hello there! I'll be reviewing your piece today :D I love the amount of metaphorical phrasing that you put into this poem. It's eloquent and nice to think about, and ...

Hello!! Welcome to YWS! I love this piece of writing. It's filled with contrasting and alternating ideas, like when you switch from the idea that you are not exactly like ...

Hi! I feel like the lyrics are super catchy. It's got an easy to remember and enticing chorus, and the way Laughing Jack pushes away his friends by forcing them ...

Hello there! I thought this piece was quite a play on what life is like. In a way, the people around us ARE "a 24x7 commentary team", constantly trying to ...

Hi! I really liked your poem. The way it shifts from lighthearted and safe to violent from stanza to stanza really pulled me in as a reader. It's like the ...