kudzugenius

The flow of this poem is very traditional, and there is nothing like going back to the basics. I would like a little more clarification on who the person you ...

[Quote= "Yes, I'll take that one please," she said as she pointed at a pure and beautiful alexandrite ring. It was sparkling in the bright Sunday sunlight. She hoped it ...

I'm actually crying. Whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy? Ok, now for critique you capitalized the "C" in countered. That is all for grammar. Why is it that you just say weak spot instead of ...

Hmmm... Can't figure out what it is. Maybe a little more character description. As I say, "Do they like waffles? Are they mentally sound? If you took more than 3 ...