kogarasumaro143

I suggest you focus on one aspect of a Telephone and use it s a metaphor to a message you want to convey that has a universal appeal (meaning it ...

The material that you are using in this poem is quite good. I love how you weave your topic making it universally appealing. However I have some issue about the ...

HOPE! yes. hope is what i felt while reading your poem. I expect that it will be some what grieving but I was just shock seeing that unexpectedly... so, it ...

@Fran94: Gee! Thanks... How you see my work and how I see it as the author quite relate to each other but not all. I can't blame myself for not ...

@justagirl: "He will be drawn no mercy out of him," Thanks for addressing what confuses you... But I will think it over if its appropriate to change such for I ...

i already changed this one... hoping that I could post the entire novel... :D

I hope i could extend it.

@Flower~Child and bluewaterlily: "heart of space" is also the same if we say "heart of emptiness"

@Adeera: Thanks.. Hehehe. I just don't know how to express myself.. Exactly, that's what I want to impart to.

ABSOLUTELY!

@Flower~Child: *smiles* Thanks anyways. Ok, I will remove that phrase. And about your question, why do I write this if i don't like to write poems, is that I only ...

@Flower~Child: Yah! you're right, that I need to put more background about my poem but I will just leave it like that. Thanks!! I will have it edited!

*shock with awe* WOW! As it was I am with your trip. It makes me float for a moment and hallucinating the beauty of your own world. Little twist and ...

@fatimah: Thanks!

ohhhh! Great! You really use the adjective "resource" to its level of usage. It really helps a lot in relaying messages to your reader. Just a little revisions and voala ...