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They are both worlds apart, there is no way to compare them. I really love them both. Twilight is much less dark and more about Bella and Edwards relationship whereas ...

I like the idea of the repetition but it seems almost too sudden. I would say maybe try and add something in between the changing moods. And the parallel to ...

I really like this, I like the rhyme scheme, it flows well. My only problem was this verse; ok so this is the lyrics i made up after a song ...

I really like that you are doing this from both a male and female perspective, I applaud you for that. Its not easy to write from the opposite sex's point ...

Hello, I really enjoyed this. It was great, really makes you think. The first two stanzas flow really well, but I found that when you get to the third one, ...