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Re: Wishing Om A Dead Star
These lyrics are really interesting. I can see the amount of romance in each word. I understand the metaphors and allegories you use in your sentences and the idioms you ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: UNTiTLED
Hello, this is Kman134 and I'm here to review your poem. Despite being very short, I enjoy the emotion of pessimism and melancholy in it. It expresses the emotions that ...
Aug 2, 2013 -
Re: Sleepy
I like how the concept of the poem is about sleep and dreams. This reminds me of a bedtime story my mother use to tell me. The grammar and the ...
Jul 3, 2013 -
Re: I Am A Dragon
This poem touches my soul for, to me, the dragon is a free creature that's filled with wisdom and strength. I enjoy reading this poem. I love how you bold ...
Jun 25, 2013 -
Re: who has choices anymore
This is one depressing story. The story doesn't seem to be going anywhere. Who died? Where does this story set? Is this the first chapter? You could a lot better ...
Jun 25, 2013
