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  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Wishing Om A Dead Star

    These lyrics are really interesting. I can see the amount of romance in each word. I understand the metaphors and allegories you use in your sentences and the idioms you ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: UNTiTLED

    Hello, this is Kman134 and I'm here to review your poem. Despite being very short, I enjoy the emotion of pessimism and melancholy in it. It expresses the emotions that ...

    Aug 2, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Sleepy

    I like how the concept of the poem is about sleep and dreams. This reminds me of a bedtime story my mother use to tell me. The grammar and the ...

    Jul 3, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: I Am A Dragon

    This poem touches my soul for, to me, the dragon is a free creature that's filled with wisdom and strength. I enjoy reading this poem. I love how you bold ...

    Jun 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: who has choices anymore

    This is one depressing story. The story doesn't seem to be going anywhere. Who died? Where does this story set? Is this the first chapter? You could a lot better ...

    Jun 25, 2013


The simple truth is that authors like making people squirm. If this weren't the case, all novels would be filled completely with cute bunnies having birthday parties.
— Brandon Sanderson, Alcatraz Versus the Evil Librarians