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Thanks for the review! I'll definitely clear some of those things up to make it flow better :)

Thank you very much! Usually I am a free verse poet as well, but I'm trying to expand my horizons as best as I can. I'm actually writing this as ...

Thank you very very much for the review. As a new writer I feel like I don't get a lot of constructive criticism, and I'm glad you provided me with ...

Thank you so much! I worked really hard on this poem and I'm so happy you liked it :)

Hey! I'm pretty new to YWS also, so we can figure things out together :) And to address the question: Yes, they are on a boat. Sorry If that was ...

Thank you so much! As a new writer I really appreciate all the feedback! You pointed out some flaws I went over, I'll definitely go back and change them, especially ...

I truly, truly, truly enjoyed this story. It was so beautifully written and I just loved everything about it. Unlike some of the other reviewers, I think I might understand ...

I think this is a beautiful poem! I haven't read the book that this poem is based off, but I think its such a cool idea that you're telling the ...

I love this! It has a great message, and I love the subtle humor in it. I can tell this is something you're passionate about, and I love that. P.S- ...