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Re: One Last Dance
Hey there! First thoughts- this was really, really well written. Your use of vocabulary and sentence structure was fantastic; something that is very hard to achieve! Good job! The plot ...
Sep 9, 2016 -
Re: exception to the rule, my beautiful boys
Hey! Here with a review for ya! Okay- to start off- the first sentence really confused me. "Does it count if everyone thinks mistakes him for my beautiful baby girl?" ...
Aug 9, 2016 -
Re: Him...
Hey there! Here with a review! I'd like to start off by saying that I liked this story, because as it was based on a real-life event, I know situations ...
Aug 4, 2016 -
Re: Regret
hey there! While this story was beautifully, and I mean BEAUTIFULLY written, I found a few moments in the story a bit confusing. First off, the sentence "Grab & Go ...
Jun 27, 2016 -
Re: Strings
I truly, truly, truly enjoyed this story. It was so beautifully written and I just loved everything about it. Unlike some of the other reviewers, I think I might understand ...
Feb 8, 2016 -
Re: The Forest
I think this is a beautiful poem! I haven't read the book that this poem is based off, but I think its such a cool idea that you're telling the ...
Feb 8, 2016 -
Re: Painted: 1.0.2
This is amazing! I love love love it. Beautifully written. I'm not a professional author or anything, but I'd like to say that only piece of constructive criticism I have ...
Feb 7, 2016 -
Re: Lunch Money
This... was extraordinarily great. Beautifully written. I love all the detail you add when you're describing anything, and I feel as if I can see the characters myself. Your use ...
Feb 7, 2016