klennon14

Wow, I love this! The ending killed me!

Thanks for the review! It is so helpful! I can see where I'm confusing my readers, and I am in the process of editing the first two chapters.

Hello, thank you so much for the review! Just wanted to say that this is only part 1 of chapter 2. I should have wrote that in the description, but ...

Hey, thanks for the review! This is so helpful, and it's helping me get a handle on my characters. :)

Sorry, my computer acted weird before I could finish the review! I just wanted to say, I really loved the idea of your story. I felt this way until high ...

Ha ha I like words too! Thanks for the advice, it really helps :)

I could see how confusing this story could be to some people. I wish we could switch places and you could see inside my head, because the plot has such ...

Your very welcome! It was no problem :) I am so happy to hear that my review meant so much to you. I enjoy reviewing because it helps out writers ...

Lol, I really take my readers on a rollercoaster ride, don't I? I base it off of my mood often times, and I'm quite the moody writer!

Thanks for the review :) I suppose Ronnie is sort of like myself, because I use odd words for a teenager ;) It's almost like the Fault in Our Stars- ...

Hello there, thanks for the review! I agree, it did happen very fast. I kind of wanted it to be a one night stand turned into something bigger, though they ...

Your welcome! I apologize for the obnoxious length of my review, but I'm a rambler :)

Thank you so much! It's funny when you have someone else look at your work, and you're smacking yourself in the forehead for silly mistakes like "click" instead of "clique." ...

I'd like to thank you for your honesty. I need reviewers to tell me when something I include is unnecessary or just plain stupid. I agree, I do not give ...

Thanks for the review! Like I told BlueAfrica above, I purposely made Ronnie and Landon's thoughts sporadic/illogical because they are hung over/coming down from their highs. There are some kinks ...