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oh man!!! i really wanted to read that chapter lol... this story is great! I love it. lol it was funny when she saw that his zipper was undone lol. ...

hey.. this was really good. i'm not much of a poet myself. I just write stories. this is really really good.... i love it... i get why she is running ...

This is awesome. I'm not actually a poet myself. I'm more of a story writer but sometimes when I'm feeling down I write some poems to express myself. This is ...

I think this is a good story, but you could add a little more description into it. I have to agree with Radid... does she think that killing the guy ...

Welcome! This is really good. I love the story line. I think that you could probably have put a bit more suspense in it. The part where the plane crashes ...