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Well, this is my first story. I think that it is fine to have some mistakes in it. By The Way What do you think, is this part instresting?

Thanks for your review. In this part, many things are in my imagination but I made many plans within it so I think the story will make sense when it ...

Well, this is my first work so you can find some mistakes in it. I thought the characters info will be given through various scenes within it and I decided ...

Thanks, man I have few stories in my mind but it is rather hard to give them the shape that needs but the story will be interesting for sure