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Re: The Way You Say My Name
Ok you did real good in my opinion. Like in all works there will be haters. When you come across them make it your motivator to prove them wrong you ...
Oct 26, 2013 -
Re: .
I would say this not bad. It takes time to write good stories and practice. With me I review and edit my story at least 15 times. Say you did ...
Oct 26, 2013 -
Re: Dancing In the Minefields- chap 1
Wow just came close to bring tear to my eye it didn't but I never been this close to crying in a long time. You really need to continue it ...
Oct 26, 2013 -
Re: The Runaways Chapter 2
This is not bad. I would say more descriptive details but when i write a story i will for get it also so in my case its ok for me. ...
Oct 24, 2013 -
Re: A Thousand Thoughts
I must say not half bad. With a lot of things it could be better. But then again there two things you can never forget. Number one is be true ...
Oct 24, 2013 -
Re: Dirty Little Secret Chapter 1
i would say this you have an okay to good hook. I can never get a good one for my storys. You do have somewhat of a good vitim going. ...
Oct 24, 2013