kingopossum

Well this was a twist! It wasn't what I expected, but it was rad anyway. There's so much that I want to know. What is the commander doing? Where is ...

This poem seems very heartfelt! The rhythm is nice, and the whole thing flows well! I really enjoyed the beginning where you compare the media depiction of witches to the ...

Hello again! Here to leave you another review, friend! This chapter was super interesting. It gives a good idea of how the characters are personality-wise, especially Ragnar, who I hope ...

I loved this poem! The structure is nice, and as someone who struggles with some level of depersonalization, I could relate a lot. I love your word choice, especially in ...

This poem is beautiful! Your word choice is great and the piece had a good rhythm to it. At times the rhyme scheme seems a bit off, but it's easy ...

Hello! I legitimately adore your main character. Their personality is unique and they just seem very real (regardless of it being a fantasy story about goblins and wizards.) Each character ...

Hello! I'll start by saying that this was wonderfully action-filled and really made me want to read more. I enjoyed your inclusion of Farren's thoughts every once and a while. ...

Hello! This story is very well written! The way Carol acts seems incredibly realistic for someone being put into her situation, separating herself from her loved ones and simply waiting, ...

Hello! This story is really interesting. I find Kate's point of view very fun to read, she's pretty funny and always has something witty to say. Her sense of humor ...