kingolions

Hey. I really like what you wrote. It has depth and meaning to it. It makes you think about more than just what happened, but the consequences that came from ...

Hey. I do agree with what the others have said. It needs to flow smoothly. The grammar is one of the big things for me. I have written a few ...

Hey. I do like your poem. I think it is good, but I don't really like how it changes style half way through. It is a good idea, but if ...

Hey. This is a very good poem. Normally, when I review or leave comments, I leave a bit of criticism, but I don't think there is anything to criticize. What ...

Hey. I did like the poem, but I think a lot along the same lines of the others. I do however want to say that I don't agree about what ...

Hey, It is a good poem, but not all of it makes sense. I do like the part about the knife. Is it meant to be like a thing of ...

Hey. It is really good. Just remember, you don't [i]need[i] to have your work rhyme, but you can also use it to make what you want to write more powerful. ...

It was really good, and not like what people would normally write. That would be why I like it. I like the bit Run baby, run. Do the things they ...