kiashana

I actually liked that you just jumped into things. A few grammar errors caught my eye and were kind of irritating. In the first paragraph, third sentence, you used "here" ...

I like the character's name, and I think this could be interesting if you were to develop it more. You've stated that it's unfinished- could you give me an idea ...

Very interesting. I hadn't heard about Russia's actions yet, and I'm just a little horrified, so thanks for making me aware of that. “So what? They’re fighting against Israel” I ...

I prefer Harry Potter to LotR. While I understand that part of what makes Tolkien such a genius the immense world he created and the mythology and all... He's extremely ...

To be honest, this isn't exactly among my favorite books. In fact, I don't really like The Diary of Anne Frank at all. As a piece of literature, it's decent. ...

I really liked that. The wording is very spare and simple, but it works very well with what you've said you were going for. I'm not quite sure why Abby's ...

I read it just now... And I have things to say, but the bell is going to ring in about five minutes, and I can't be online during my next ...

Oh god. That was really creepy. I wouldn't want to read that at night, it would give me nightmares of my own. It flowed really well- you can't really tell ...

I really liked it. There were a few sentences that I thought could have been worded better, though. It wasn’t because I particularly liked her, but it was because she ...

That was very well written. I agree with the person who posted before; the section on your grandfather doesn't seem to do what you said you want it to do. ...

Wow. I really like that. Good use of the present tense- normally I have trouble putting up with that. I can really feel your character, even though he isn't really ...