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Re: Better than nicotine
That makes a lot more sense! Thanks for letting me know. I'm glad this helped!
Dec 12, 2018 -
Re: i do not like myself
Thanks so much for this review :D
Nov 26, 2018 -
Re: i do not like myself
Thanks so much for this review :D
Nov 26, 2018 -
Re: every year, something else
Thank you so much for the review! Long rambles are great :D One day I swear I'll actually go and edit poems haha, but these were very nice points, thanks!
Oct 28, 2018 -
Re: every year, something else
Thanks!
Oct 25, 2018 -
Re: Marble Lungs / Draft two / Chapter one
I think it is only in this part: and sorry I am on mobile if this comes out weird. Don't risk your sobriety," tbh that was my thought actually he ...
Oct 14, 2018 -
Re: Which One is Mine?
Just glad I could help you :) Coding is tough.
Oct 4, 2018 -
Re: Birds of War (revised)
Lol, wow, I can't believe you responded! I wanted to do old works for Review Month, but sorry if this annoyed you having a review on a work from so ...
Oct 3, 2018 -
Re: reader/writer
Okay, well I am sorry it did not make sense as a poem. I am kind of curious as to what you would deem a poem to be or make ...
Oct 1, 2018 -
Re: reader/writer
Hi there! Welcome to YWS. A poem does not actually need to have a rhyme scheme or have a built in rhythm. In addition, a poem really can be anything ...
Oct 1, 2018 -
Re: The Crew 1.1
Hey! Thanks so much for the review. I hope to be editing this chapter over the weekend, or sometime soon, so I will definitely try to add some world building. ...
Sep 28, 2018 -
Re: the possibly chronological order of someone growing up
Thank you very much. I am happy you liked it! XD
Sep 27, 2018 -
Re: The Crew 1.1
Thank you so much for this, and yes this is one of the two I requested. Honestly, if you don%u2019t want to review the poem, then I am very fine ...
Sep 27, 2018 -
Re: past our due date
Thanks for the review!
Sep 26, 2018 -
Re: past our due date
Hi. To start, I like to mess with my style, so little punctuation and not capitalizing are my main things I like to try. Sorry if that confused you. I ...
Sep 23, 2018
