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  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, Realistic Re: Better than nicotine

    That makes a lot more sense! Thanks for letting me know. I'm glad this helped!

    Dec 12, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: i do not like myself

    Thanks so much for this review :D

    Nov 26, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: i do not like myself

    Thanks so much for this review :D

    Nov 26, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: every year, something else

    Thank you so much for the review! Long rambles are great :D One day I swear I'll actually go and edit poems haha, but these were very nice points, thanks!

    Oct 28, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: every year, something else

    Thanks!

    Oct 25, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Narrative Re: Marble Lungs / Draft two / Chapter one

    I think it is only in this part: and sorry I am on mobile if this comes out weird. Don't risk your sobriety," tbh that was my thought actually he ...

    Oct 14, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Which One is Mine?

    Just glad I could help you :) Coding is tough.

    Oct 4, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Birds of War (revised)

    Lol, wow, I can't believe you responded! I wanted to do old works for Review Month, but sorry if this annoyed you having a review on a work from so ...

    Oct 3, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: reader/writer

    Okay, well I am sorry it did not make sense as a poem. I am kind of curious as to what you would deem a poem to be or make ...

    Oct 1, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: reader/writer

    Hi there! Welcome to YWS. A poem does not actually need to have a rhyme scheme or have a built in rhythm. In addition, a poem really can be anything ...

    Oct 1, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Historical Fiction Re: The Crew 1.1

    Hey! Thanks so much for the review. I hope to be editing this chapter over the weekend, or sometime soon, so I will definitely try to add some world building. ...

    Sep 28, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: the possibly chronological order of someone growing up

    Thank you very much. I am happy you liked it! XD

    Sep 27, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Historical Fiction Re: The Crew 1.1

    Thank you so much for this, and yes this is one of the two I requested. Honestly, if you don%u2019t want to review the poem, then I am very fine ...

    Sep 27, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: past our due date

    Thanks for the review!

    Sep 26, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: past our due date

    Hi. To start, I like to mess with my style, so little punctuation and not capitalizing are my main things I like to try. Sorry if that confused you. I ...

    Sep 23, 2018


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