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Ah hello! Thanks for the review c: I am so glad you like Hablex C: I might need to try to add some more plot-building pre this chapter, but I%u2019ll ...

Ah! The mobile glitch has attacked once more %u2014 so my apostrophes turned to %u2019 again, but I hope that message helped XD

Hello there! Thanks for the review. To answer your question, Hablex uses they/them pronouns, so they are a singular person! They%u2019re just non-binary so they don%u2019t use he/she pronouns ^_^ ...

Ah that makes a lot of sense! Thanks for the explanation C:

Oh ok that sounds pretty interesting! Ahh, ok, the cigarettes makes sense, and the fights as well. Thanks!

I am pretty unobservant, so I would admit to being confused, and I would say to perhaps put a note at the end of the poem saying that both parts ...

Hmm, I can understand that! I think that makes more sense then, from that kind of journey. Thanks for explaining it to me.

Oh my gosh! I did not notice that at all. I am not sure what kind of effect you want from reflecting the whole poem? I took reflection to mean ...

Lol that is pretty fair. That would have been funny if they just left her there though haha.

Absolutely, actually! I can leave you little comments on the chapters XD, so the link would be great, thank you! ^^

Thanks so much for your speedy review! In writing these two pieces I hadn't come up with a good "how do the baddies get involved" and it would have worked ...

Hm. So I think it is a little slow? But most fantasy novels have to start slow to let the reader know about what kind of world this place is, ...

I can really understand that sentiment on friends not including you. This past year after my graduation I have not talked with nearly anyone that I was technically friendly with ...

Oh, I was wondering if they meant to be the same girl! I had typed up that question before deleting it because I wasn%u2019t sure how to interpret the poem ...

Thanks so much for the review, Light! ^^