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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The lesson of the TP

    This is really funny. I like it a lot. You could turn this into a full story. Your mechanics are perfect, unless I missed something. It's realistic in a sad ...

    Jul 4, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: tomato and orange

    This story is funny and all, but it has no structure. It has a good plot, but I have the feeling you wrote this just for the heck of writing ...

    Jul 2, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Ephemeral And Hard Working - That's Me!

    This is pretty funny. I'm guessing you got bitten by an ant earlier, then wrote a story about it from the ant's point of view. I personally think you can ...

    Jul 1, 2011


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