kenni

Thank you so much! Well I'm stoked it held your attention! I've been writing little pieces and going back and adding detail, I can totally understand by what you mean ...

hey! that makes a lot more sense now! ha ha but yea... u should read my first chapter....I'm not too sure how to find it but its got pretty much ...

Thanks for the help with the editing. No offence has been taken, but if you read the first chapter, you should be able to predict that I'm not writing just ...

hey! thanks so much for the advice! it's really going to help a lot! Lena thanks for the help... there is a couple of things i didn't change because it ...