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Wow, this was really touching. I really felt exactly what emotions the narrator was feeling while I was reading it, so kudos for that. I thought the whole thing was ...

I liked this a lot. I agree with Emma that you have a very unique style of writing. However, I don't think you necessarily need more details, like their names ...

Wuthering Heights stank. Stinks. Stunk. It was completely unbelievable, all about people destroying themselves for love. Catherine decides that she won't marry Heathcliff, but she has to destroy herse

Wow, I liked this a lot. It was so sad! The only thing I would change is that some of the conversation between Danny and Dean, when they were talking ...

Interesting. :D Dang, I know that rhyme will be stuck in my head for days now... :roll:

Hello! I thought this was quite good. It flowed well and was exciting to read. You have excellent descriptions. There were several grammar/punctuation mistakes but alas, I am too lazy ...

I really liked this a lot, and I don't think it needs any more detail. It's very sad and it actually almost made me cry---although I cry at everything, so ...

Whew, space your paragraphs out please! After you do that I will come back and review it, but the big chunk of text is overwhelming. :shock: :D

I read all the other chapters of this story as well, and I like it a lot. I actually am eager to know what happens next, unlike many of the ...

Hi! First off, welcome to the site. :D Now for the story. I read the first two chapters as well and I would like to say that you have a ...

I thought some of the lines were written fairly well, but honestly, the whole thing was very, as Sumi said, "emo", and quite predictable. I can see you have talent, ...

I thought this was short but touching. I actually liked it a lot. Even just in those short paragraphs, you really got a feel for the character and what kind ...

Wow. Well, this was certainly...different. As I was reading it, I wasn't too sure that I liked it. When I got to the end and finally realized that it was ...

Well, I haven't read the other part of your novella, but I liked this part. I was a bit confused at the ending (was it the ending? or not? or ...

All-righty! Yay for Seraphim for posting his first story. *applauds politely* Now let's get down to business here, shall we? *clears throat in an unsuccessful attempt to be professional* I ...