keeperofgaming

Thanks for the review, glad you enjoyed.

And thanks

Link to both places of reading. Here is a chapter ahead though.

Hey, would you please be able to review the Prime Control, my other series?

The review was good. You always give 120% its okay to use 100 sometimes.

Alright, good, I just wanted to be sure.

Just to make sure you know there are 2 parts of each chapter.I just want to be sure, since you made your second comment here that you read the second ...

Well, Asura just recognized evil magic, he doesn't quite know she's a shard, and Thalia already knew. But, thanks for the review

thanks

Alright, I was just curious what you thought.

Should I put a gore warning at the start of the chapter?

I was kind of referencing my previous story, Mystery of the mind, with this and basically "The monster's mind. Mine in kind" means that they share a headspace.

Thanks for the review. You are always good at pointing out my mistakes and make me feel much better about my writing.

Oh, Thalias is the Elven smith. Thalia is the dragon. So, no it was intentional

No, punt is correct, Thalia is three times Rose's size remember and Rose was even in catkin form there, and thanks for the time for the review.