keeperofgaming

Nice. Yeah, I plan on catching up soon.

Thanks for writing it.

I added a 3 days ago to emphasize that it's a flashback.

I added a 3 days ago to emphasize that it's a flashback.

Thanks once again for the question mark solving, and I'll keep the advice in mind, it's quite helpful.

The totally different setting was the backstory. I added the line "How did I even get here?" to show that there was a flashback coming, but if it wasn't clear, ...

I understand, I'll work on that. It gets a lot more detailed in the later chapters. Chapter 5 starts that, but a fight thats happening soon actually really details the ...

Thank you, and thanks for pointing out the question mark. I hope you enjoy the rest of it.

Yeah and I understand thank you for the review

Well, that didn't work.

It's not mentioned until way later into the story, but the reason that they don't give absolutely heavy descriptions is because [the characters are actually narrating, but they dont realize. ...

Yeah, the in story reason there wasn't too much internal dialogue was because, until he was blocked off, Marco could still blurt, so the lack of internal dialogue was so ...

Forgot to select review.

Thank you, and I hope you have an amazing day as well.

This was a review but the thing glitched. review is still here