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Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 2
OOOOH, That was a good one. I like how the town has such a distaste for Kita by her negative identity. The distaste of even the suspicious shopkeeper is also ...
Feb 23, 2024 -
Re: The past always comes back
This is interesting. Demons held them down, leaving them trapped. The story and context slowly unfolds, but it happens in a systematic great way. Eric makes a deal with demons ...
Feb 22, 2024 -
Re: Don't Kill the Flowers.
This was enjoyable to say the least. The way the father was sad about the beauty he plucked early, but still held to work to completion, setting a perfect example ...
Feb 22, 2024 -
Re: Walking Away
Brutal and precise. This perfectly echoes the level of anger that you should have at a toxic person. The Wrath that you would feel would be immense. This enables you ...
Feb 22, 2024 -
Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 1
I absolutely love this. Kita's emotional distress allows us to see deep within her mind and psyche, allowing us to understand her fear. Her hallucinations also hint to a dark ...
Feb 22, 2024 -
Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Prologue
I quite enjoy this story. It illustrates a simple but dark look. Showing how the demon king holds a grudge. It really just showed how deep the backstory that exists ...
Feb 22, 2024 -
Re: The Lord's Call (intro pt.2)
The story shows how Tyr becomes strong through a deal with a deity. This expands the story and gives it flesh, making it quite enjoyable. I also like the fact ...
Feb 22, 2024 -
Re: The Lord's Call (intro)
The Story is quite interesting so far. An establishment of lore and worldbuilding early on, while simultaneously demonstrating the MC's passion. I like how the family understands the MC instead ...
Feb 22, 2024 -
Re: Alejandro’s aversion to all things Halloween
The story is quite well made, but I feel like it speeds along a bit too quickly. I haven't read the main story yet, I probably will, but it still ...
Feb 22, 2024
