keeperofgaming

Small one: I love that Zin is such a loveable idiot. He knows what he's doing, but he also is the most chill of them all. He's the Keefe of ...

First Impressions: I like how the demons are demonic, but they value things, such as honesty and each other. It makes them more peopleish. This allows the story to progress ...

Okay, no template this time, because this will be kinda short. I love this. The story shows the dynamic in the heads of the demons. Though, this also shows that ...

Minor error, you have no quotations here: "Kita stammered. He betrayed Corelia," First Impressions: Okay, Now I'm certain of it. Kita is half demon. Though now I know that Leiytning ...

OOOOOOOOH Getting spicy. First Impressions: Kita should have told the truth. I feel like if she said that she had a strange connection to the symbol of their tribe, then ...

First Impressions: Stud can talk... Nice. He seems very kind, and wants to help. I also like how the Conscience seemed to be threatening, but he also seemed aware of ...

Making my own template now First Impressions: Wow... That was spooky. The revelation that Kita's hallucinations were not hallucinations at all is eerie. That means that there is another beast ...

The eyes once again make me think she is a half demon. But let me finally use a template Btw, minor comma error "It's not a secret, if I plan ...

Okay, so she didn't hide anything. That's good, but this makes it seem more interesting. The fact that someone had it before makes Kita different but not yet unique. I'm ...

I like how friendly Corelia was, and how open she was about the symbol. Her want to protect Kita is quite clear, and Mao is also good at that. The ...

Well, that tells me who won the war. I knew that Correlia would come in at one point, but I find it interesting that she has an interest in Kita... ...

The illustration of a purely evil father is interesting. Could Kita be half Demon, is that why her father hated her so much. Is that why her disposition is negative ...

I love Yuna being so kind, her concern for her friend echoes the reality of the situation. She also risks getting in trouble for the same reason. It's also interesting ...

Death is something that many seek, but it strikes fast and cruelly. Unexpectedly. This poem addresses the issue of death at will. It gives a pained expression that many see, ...

The truth of shyness. If you do not move forward you lose. I've learnt this lesson many times. To truly love an individual is to be able to lose them. ...